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Haiku

Filed under: Poems, Homeschooling — Robin on January 31, 2007 @ 11:09 pm

Yesterday, for Language Arts we learned about Haiku. This is the Japanese form of poetry. Each poem has three lines. The first line has a total of 5 syllables, the second line has 7 syllables, and the third line has 5 syllables, for a total of 17 syllables.

I thought it would be easier to teach if I showed Godzilla Boy some examples of my Haiku. So here they are:

From within our home

Love pulses from floor to roof

And we are happy.

***

The rich, umber smell

Of ground and perked coffee beans

Wafts throughout the room.

***

Deep from slumber past

I arise all warm and snug

Thinking of my dream.

***

A window darkened

No hues of red or purple

It was time to sleep.

***

And this is what Godzilla Boy created:

***

Alien come here

From your cool flying saucer

And come live with me.

***

Grey, white headed dog

Cute and runs around with me

I really love him.

***

Big, fierce, destructive

Blows up military trucks

Monster from the sea.

***

Dropping lots of time

Makes me feel good, really fast

When I swim today.

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